I don't

I hate this. I hate this.

Do you know how much I hate you?

I hate this. I hate this.

So much I think I love you.

 

I can't stand it. I can't stand it.

I can't stand to be around you.

I can't stand it. I can't stand it.

How all I want is to be with you.

 

I don't like this. I don't like this.

Do you know how much I don't like you?

I don't like this. I don't like this.

All I feel is love for you.

 

I don't want it. I don't want it.

I don't want to be around you.

I don't want it. I don't want it.

I don't want to want to be with you.

Reviews

[Matthew Ian Herrawood W]

This reminds me of my poem "Damn you, i love you" im not sure about repeating the writing in bold but somthing about the way you have set this out adds power to it. i have to ask. Have you ever truly experianced this are you experianceing it currently, or have you observed it? this poem shows the confusion of feelings felt by somone going through this. it flowed well and reminded me of the time i felt the same... and the good times that came afterwards. well done

[emmajoy]

Laughing, yet sad, wondering what made you write this, unless your imagination just flew you off and away. There's terrific power in your writing here, not sure if it's coz of the change of font but it really hits home.

As another reviewer's said, it could easily be the lyrics of a thumping good song!

[An owl on the moon]

Powerfully voiced, like a song lyric.. You capture the sense of longing, yet desiring to walk away as well.. to be free.. to let go.. So well done, and the mixture of bold and italic highlights the differing mix of thoughts and feelings!

[Tim]

I hear the conflicting feelings you write about and you speak for many who feel the same way but have not put it into the same words you have. Good one Po.

[Moonflower]

Very intense write.

[TadKent]

THIS sounds like it could be a pretty intense song. :) Very cool, cuts to the bone, deep, jarring, consistent. :)

[Uniqe In Many Ways]

I love this... you are so right!!!

[Emily]

It is pain, and anger and annoying. It hurts to love someone like that and wish that you could love someone else... I hope things get better.