Memories

true story

Memories of you continued to pop into my head.

 

When you looked at me and smiled, I got excited.

 

Especting a call, I sat by my phone and waited.

 

But, all that was left was disappointment.

 

I guess it really is all just memories.

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[Loner]

A hard emotional punch is portrayed in this poem.

[Aven]

a heartfelt piece of reality beautifully expressed through a poetic pen. well done!

[Allison]

That small dose of reality that we like to ignore in our lives. How much we all wish this kind of disappointment could just flow out of the rushing river of life. How much we wish is would disappear into the air
The truth, in writing.
-Pokie

[RJM]

sad and true, this is why i follow the simple rule: Hope for the best, Expect the worst. It would make the disappointment ebb

[YouoweYoupay]

Thats a sad part of reality, confusing memories for the happy endings in our heads.

[Brighid an Lasair]

I know this feeling, but I think we all do at some point in life. The most important thing to remember is that not all people are complete social idiots, and their lack of a social conscience doesn't make it your fault.

[Ruth]

Thats the hardest part to take in!
Profoundly stated love!
Nostalgically hitting!
xx

[Tate Morgan]

Oh that is such a hard thing to blame yourself for anothers misgivings

[Ethan Castner]

Man that sucks! ive had that happen before. and it hurts a lot. But people change and people grow, all we can really do is let them go, you know what i mean?