let me Die.

let me Die.

A Poem by Poetry Girl

Dont feel like getting up.

Dont feel like talking.

Dont feel like doing anything.

 

Dont want to move.

Dont want to blink.

Dont even want to breath.

 

If you would take my life away,

You'd never have to see my face.

Just take it all away.

And take me to a magic place.

 

I'd never be a burden.

I'd never cause trouble again.

Wouldnt have to deal with me.

Just do this one sin.

 

Pull the trigger by my head.

Tie the rope around my neck.

Srike that knife through my chest.

Or chuck me off the deck.

 

Dont let me wake up again.

Dont let me shed another tear.

Dont let me frown anymore.

Take me out of this world here.

 

Im tired of this place.

Im tired of the sky.

Im tired of people.

And I dont even know why.

 

I just know I dont want to live.

So please just let me die.

Just take it all away from me.

Take me to your heaven in the sky.

 

Dont feel like getting up.

Dont feel like talking.

Dont feel like doing anything.

 

Dont want to move.

Dont want to blink.

Dont even want to breath.

 

So please just let me die.

© 2011 Poetry Girl


Author's Note

Poetry Girl
No, Im not going to kill myself.

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Reminds me of how I feel after I've driven for eleven hours with the flu. Your piece flows well and gets the feeling across nicely. I think you left a "t" out of "strike"?

Great Poetry!
Wolfie

Posted 12 Years Ago


Captured how people feel at one time or another, hopefully not too often so perfectly :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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