Darkness

Darkness

A Poem by Gil
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A poem for people who have dark hearts

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Darkness is only a vivid illusion,

An absence of light, they might call.

Darkness, dark, blackness and whatsoever,

Still it is darkness, no care, no hope.


A heart of stone,

A heart of space.

Might be preferred,

Than a heart full of thorns.


Still I believe,

That my heart of darkness will be illuminated

When the right light of mine comes along

Shines through me, brings warmth and brings love.

© 2010 Gil


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Gil
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that was nice. I liked it. Best of luck for the competition.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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[email protected] thanks.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is good. It reads like the thoughts of someone who is trapped in a small dark room, sitting, waiting for someone to open the door so the way out can be seen. Great write

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Gil
Gil

Iligan City, Norther Mindanao, Philippines



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