Sun

Sun

A Poem by Gil
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Crying for her to come back

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Walking in the shore,

Striding in the sand.

Thinking it over,

The thoughts I can’t stand.

 

In the east it rise,

In the west it sets

Hope is what I see

Between you and me.

 

I cried to it,

“Oh! Please, Please don’t set”

Begging to thee,

It’s not over yet.

 

Oh God, why?

Letting my sun to set.

Why did you let her go?

From me who loves her deeply

© 2010 Gil


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Added on May 21, 2010
Last Updated on July 10, 2010
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Gil
Gil

Iligan City, Norther Mindanao, Philippines



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