Gunshot

Being trapped by a gunshot is way worse than you may think!

       The piercing shriek of the AK47 was louder than I could ever imagine. My ears filled with the horrible sound. It was like my little sisters crying while I'm trying to watch my  favorite television show. Obnoxious and rude! The gunshot filled the air to where I could not escape. I was at war, there is no escape to war. I was trapped by the GUNSHOT!    

Author's Note

Comments would be nice. Please be honest!

Reviews

[Darkening Shadow]

Your so Mean!

[koolkat]

Jerk and i wasnt talking about you paiger

[Darkening Shadow]

I know I was just kidding. Nice Write.

[koolkat]

Thanks

[KillerWithWords]

I don't want to give harsh criticism without knowing your age.
You described this horrifying sound well. I am too curious as to know why this gun was shot.
Well done.

[koolkat]

Well he is at war and the gun was shot to kill him and i am ten

[koolkat]

Thanks for being honest i appreciate that thanks again

[Croatoan]

That was interesting but i feel like it ended a bit too quickly. Other than that though, i like sense of imagery and the comparisons. Nice write and well done.

[Dreamz Are Power]

She is only ten so its pretty good for her age

[Croatoan]

I never said it wasn't. She did really good.

[Dreamz Are Power]

I wasnt trying to be mean just wanted to make sure everyone newbso theyre was like no cursing or being innaproprate

[Croatoan]

Oh. Well that's nice of you. No hard feelings.

[koolkat]

She is my sis