The universal language

The universal language

A Poem by Deeper La'jik

A multi dimensional geometrical field symbolized by Words and numbers.
In translation via lucid glimmers of ingenuity. 
Internal-dynamics; composing brilliant lyrics. 
Rumors of devils; False notions of god. 
Those in reality; Those hidden behind facades. 
Holy cities, skyscrapers, guns, crucified nations.
 Murder for fun, destruction, procreation. 
Blood eaters, vampires, needles in veins. 
Mortals of infamy, baseless living their life in vain
                 And then there's love- 
 A narcotic for the heart;
             The most powerful of magnetic 
   Energies to keep us from falling apart 

© 2013 Deeper La'jik


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You see so deeply past the facades that blind us from the depths and richness of love.. yes, the one force above all others that gives us beauty, and passion, and binds us to each other like nothing else in the universe. Let us speak, and let our language ever be love.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cool love the free verse poem, if it is done like this. Very rich, vivid imagery here.

Posted 11 Years Ago


love will tear us apart...or NOT

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is like something I would write. We are kindred souls...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Deeper La'jik

11 Years Ago

Coming from you your review means a lot ;)
A very powerful and gripping poem. I love the contrast from hopelessness and pain to one of hope. A wonderful poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Deeper La'jik

11 Years Ago

The initial idea was to transition from mechanical and impersonal to subjective feeling. Apparently .. read more

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