Bloom

Bloom

A Poem by aria

this living stone
its own poem
bursts vibrance forth from 
some grey-blue slit
and split
gains momentum
grasping sun's rays.

gasping for breath
you marvel at the life
before.

wonder.
It is life

a soft cadence;
something akin to love.

© 2013 aria


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Without the vid - it held me, had me thinking many things... then the vid took them all away... a shame, the one time a pic KILLED a thousand words...

Posted 10 Years Ago


aria

10 Years Ago

For me, I felt like the poem couldn't do the video justice. I have never seen a living stone. To me,.. read more
Chris

10 Years Ago

For me - the vid did not do YOUR work justice. Your thoughts were why I paused. YOUR thoughts were.. read more
aria

10 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
Poetry can bloom and wither from many sources and muses...Bravo

Posted 10 Years Ago


aria

10 Years Ago

Yes. Life. Breathing. A flower from what looks like a stone. So simple. So miraculous.
Some.. read more
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Wow. So true. I feel the power of your wisdom...No pun intended...You are welcome...:)..............
Some plants can grow almost anywhere...even force their way through a tarmac pavement! Others are more delicate and need just the right conditions to flourish. A bit like people really! An interesting and thought-provoking write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


aria

10 Years Ago

Thank you! Yes. I agree.
Interesting concept... I have to say that it took me a couple of readings before I was confident that I could make a decision as to what this was really about--I came up with the idea of poetry and words (as they are one of the fullest forms of emotion) being life, and the way that life has a tendancy to to "soldier on" so to speak, even when it must burst through stone to do so. Anyway...I liked the imagery, and the flow was nice.

Posted 10 Years Ago


aria

10 Years Ago

It's always so interesting to find out what others take away. Thank you for taking the time to read .. read more
even the stoniest heart, the one damaged by so much rain of pain...it can become tendered by love...

softened..and from that stone...a flower can grow and bloom...

metaphorically beautiful piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


aria

10 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob!
It's now made a smile on my smile, a feel of coldness comes from the piece, you refreshed my mind by your words used in the piece. It's a piece of peace. I loved this piece, so creatively you've drafted every word ...it's really suited with yer title. Well done, once again a creative job by a creative writer i've seen. Beautifully written piece once again!

Posted 10 Years Ago


aria

10 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on October 1, 2013
Last Updated on October 1, 2013
Tags: wonder, life, love, happiness, bloom, flower

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I am a writer, painter, photographer and teacher. I joined this site to read other writers' work and to have people read and critique mine. I look forward to getting to know you all and reading.. more..

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