Success

This is a poem from my soul and heart.....

Someone said earning honour is success ,

Other said earning money is success , 

Yet another said earning position in society is success ,

But i said

Earning happiness is what is success.

                                                                 Success is the enchanting word ,

                                                                 the bewildering noun ,

                                                                 the horrifying feeling ,

                                                                 and the beautiful treasure.

For what a student wakes till night

Takes water on his sleepy face and again studies ,

A dancer though tired

practices his dance ,

A musician pains his throat

But again and again sings his song ,

This is success.

                                                               The meaning of success might vary ,

                                                                But the centre of attraction it offers

                                                                is the same be it Anne or Mary ,

                                                      

Someone wise said

Running behind money is what makes you mad

but in every work searching for satisfaction , 

is what makes your every reaction a successful action.........

Author's Note

This is what means success to me and i am eager to welcome your suggestions .....

Reviews

[Surya]

This is what happiness to me, if you are happy then you are successful, money is a mere piece of paper, no worries about that, what makes me worry is lack of smile on their lips with my fellows,...sorry it was lengthy..but well done.
Thank you Riddhi for sharing your success with us..haha..

[Riddhi]

Thanks for your review...

[poeatree]

nice visualization I enjoyed this ever much.

[Riddhi]

Thanks for your kind words...

[Riddhi]

Thanks for your kind words...

[A Humble Poet]

You are so correct! Happiness is success, it is the key to life! Great job!!!

[Riddhi]

Thanks for your kind words....

[A Humble Poet]

Well you definitly deserve them!

[Arooj Purra]

this poem is really fantastic .....

[Riddhi]

Thank you !!!!!!

[Prantik Ali]

"Earning happiness is what is success"
Nice work!! :)
Keep on writing :) :)

[Riddhi]

Thank you so much...

[Prantik Ali]

You're welcome!

[Prantik Ali]

You're welcome!

[Prantik Ali]

"Earning happiness is what is success"
Nice work!! :)
Keep on writing :) :)

[Aswin R Prasad]

Great write and a wise write..
Love your ideas and views about success ;)

Good use of words too.. Keep writing more and i'm sure that success will come to you! ;)

Looking forward to read more of your works! Thanks for sharing! :)

[Riddhi]

Thanks for reviewing....

[Hitarth Raval]

Amazing combination of words to make it a sensible and outstanding piece of writing.Keep it up. :)

[Riddhi]

Thanks for reviewing...

[Hitarth Raval]

You are welcome.

[zunie frost]

a wise poetry !!!! i must say your idea is so thoughtful and fruitful !!! it delivers a perfect massage for every one !! i love this poem !! keep writing

[Riddhi]

Thanks for your kind words...I really appreciate it..

[zunie frost]

welcome !!

[ei Funding]

if everyone feels the same way, as expressed in this beautiful poem if yours; the world would be a very happy place

[Riddhi]

Thank you....