Rise up Rise up!!!!

Rise up Rise up!!!!

A Poem by Riddhi
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A poem from the core of my heart

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Time comes when you just cry and cry ,
At that time you should tell yourself to again and again try.
Every diamond was earlier a coal ,
Do not limit yourself to just one role.


Rise up, rise up whenever you fall ,
those who demoralize you, you have to show them all.


when everything you possess ,
life appears like a bed of roses.
you have everyone as your friend ,
and happiness becomes your trend.


But when you are enveloped by problems,
you understand that on this bed of life there are more thorns than petals.
fair - weather friends are discovered.
true friends are the one who always cared.

Every dusk is followed by a dawn ,
Every autumn is followed by a spring.
Thus every failure is followed by success.

Courage is not to be shown ,
when it is easy to show.
Brave is not the one who moves from light to light ,
but the one who moves from dark to light.

Rise up , Rise up whenever you fall
Those who demoralize you , you have to show them all !!!!!!!

© 2016 Riddhi


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Riddhi
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I felt hopeful, light
its inspiring and raw, a wonderful message.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Riddhi

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words...
The title intrigued me cause Sixx Am has a new song called rise up... I think this is an inspiring poem for of some creatively wise verses...

Every diamond was earlier a coal ,
and

Courage is not to be shown ,
when it is easy to show.

are a couple of my favs...

One thought, should it be "Every winter is followed by a spring"
Just a thought.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Riddhi

7 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind words...Yes , i will certainly try to make change and follow your suggestion of.. read more
''Every diamond was earlier a coal ,
Do not limit yourself to just one role.''--this is one of the best lines I've ever read.

I love the strong message your poem delivers. Its motivating and very optimistic. Keep up the good work.



Posted 7 Years Ago


Riddhi

7 Years Ago

Thanks for your sweet words...
I agree dear Poet.
"Rise up , Rise up whenever you fall
Those who demoralize you , you have to show them all !!!!!!!"
I liked the positive energy and the drive in your poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote




Posted 8 Years Ago


Riddhi

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing......
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.
You keep raising your bar Ridhi. This is just superb, different from what you have been writing but equally good or I will say one of your best piece and I really enjoy reading your work. You have great future ahead little girl, with these kinds of thoughts and the talent you possess....keep writing....

Posted 8 Years Ago


Riddhi

8 Years Ago

Oh!! Really ????? I am happy that you liked my poem and thanks for reviewing....
CA Anurag Sharma

8 Years Ago

Yes, I enjoyed this poem a lot..You are welcome. the little poetess :)
very motivating!
good one!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Riddhi

8 Years Ago

Thank you!!!
Certainly the best guides to life's possibilities are those experienced by the writer themselves. It assures the reader of a proven worth.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Riddhi

8 Years Ago

I agree with you and thanks for reviewing....
a very good poem,only one thing i need too know,
try,cry
possess,roses
friend,trend
were you trying to rhyme in the poem or it is just random???

Posted 8 Years Ago


Riddhi

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing and about the question what do you think...If you think i was trying to rhyme t.. read more
Great positive vibe Riddhi. :) Thanks for sharing

Posted 8 Years Ago


Riddhi

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing...
Ahh! I LOVE this!! :) Very well done. It was something I needed to read. Thank you!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Riddhi

8 Years Ago

Hey! I should be thankful to you for your kind words....thanks for reviewing...

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Riddhi

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I am Riddhi , a 17 year old girl , a proud Indian...My friends say that i am antic but i am not antic rather i am unique..I am queen of mood swings and its really difficult to handle me...I love trave.. more..

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