Perfect Illusion

Perfect Illusion

A Poem by Randolf Ramos
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how perspective clash and unite for humankind

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Ideas are illusion, designed to be shattered
The reigning thought and perception, 
                     distort the image.
Human perspective are the culprit.
Blaming, projecting the mortal immortalizing.
A perfect illusion is an imperfect one, yet
            for some mortals , a perfect scheme.

Illusion, a charming way to compliment life.
That who compliments makes it charming for life, yet
            such edges are rude, not a cynical disguise.
Illusion are exclusive, that it bears disdain, at same time
            complimenting the one who see the whole picture.
I made illusions exclusive, it is another form of illusion.

I am rude, yet my illusions compliments me for it.
Proving that illusion are exclusive, filled with experiences,
              prejudices that won't fit for one or the other, but 
              complimenting me.

My illusion is imperfect, but it glimmers with hope,
               understanding, lessons that I've learned.
I will never feel disdain for the diversity of illusion,
               some fit for me, others does not, yet I compliment
               the diversity of illusions that keeps me appreciating life.

Perhaps for me, the perfect illusion 
lies in the diversity of its essence.
Freedom of expression renounces mediocrity.
If illusions were built on freedom of expressions,
we are celebrating the diversity of our perception.

Humanity is moving forward!

© 2010 Randolf Ramos


Author's Note

Randolf Ramos
Never hate me, i am ignorant in things and needs enlightenment, yet the illusion that I have are filled with my own prejudices. but, all of us are filled with our own illusions that guides us in life.

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great job !

Posted 12 Years Ago


If so many things are an illusion, then who is to say that our life is just many illusions of one beings thoughts? This is a piece that really gets you thinking.

Posted 13 Years Ago


There is a brilliant movement of thought and emotion here.. reaching for reality in illusion... I often wonder about the depth of reality.. if dreams are not just as true experientially in our minds.. Powerful, vivid expression here.

Posted 13 Years Ago


an illustrious illussion.

Posted 13 Years Ago


When I was a young man. The world had a dream of utopia. Somewhere the new world of peace and where art would be appreciated faded into the wind of time. Freedom had no value. Here in the USA. We have less rights then most of the world. You poem open the doors to many good questions. I believe Humanity felled backwards after 9-11. Allow the monsters took control of the world. War and fear is in control.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


interesting, I like it. lol I wonder if this poem reflects you in some way. If it does then you must have an excellent mind which thinks for itself... amazing. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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RJM
Keep moving forward! Humanity may craft a tale of blood and death but in the end Humanity is not about that, it is a story of ideas. Ideas that shines a light through dark corners.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow!
A deeply moving and reflective piece love!
Humanity can only move on, forward, we have lost all our balance! There has to be a rise of enlightenment!
Great poem, awesome!
xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


Such a deep thought poured out from the wealth of human mind. This reminds me of the film, Inception. Powerful write. Keep writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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that's a deep journey through your mind..needs to be reread and digested..

Posted 13 Years Ago



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