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A Poem by carmz
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"this for you, but i know you'll never read this cause u have fade away"

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time has pass so fast
as we can't think of it
and now we are on the recent age
not knowing what will be our voyage is

are we going to have our victor won
or we will just loss the chance of having it
what should we do?
what will be our answer?what will be the answer for this?

our love one come and go
can't we stop them from doing so?
like the water in the bay
they also pass us by
with a simple smile

which touches our hearts
and beg them to stay
even for a little while
is this what we had call life?

© 2010 carmz


Author's Note

carmz
such a message for her...........

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I really like this one, esprecially the last stanza.
This is beuatiful

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poem is beautiful and true. We must roll with life and hope we learn to be wiser with people around us. I like the gentle feel and a question is always a good way to end a poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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