Confused

Making mistakes

I want to have you

I need to want you

I cry to feel you

I smile to touch you

I push to please you

I ended up loosing you

Reviews

[Rhine Wolf]

to push to hard can lead to the lost of something special.
I get the feeling that this is what happened here.
I love the simplicity of the poem, it gets the picture across nicely.

Blessed be.
Fallon