Wings

Wings

A Poem by LivingHope.
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A poem I wrote for my Communication Arts class

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She has beautiful wings like a bird.
They are her escape from her life.
And she has a family too;
A family with wings like birds.
Six of them in all,
And each as different as the first.
 
They all escape from lives of loss
To lives of beautiful flight
And belonging, flying way up high
In that very bright blue sky.
Reaching speeds too high to count,
They want to keep going but cannot.
 
It is a life they love,
And one to keep forever,
But it will not last,
It can wear out fast.
Conflicts will end, and more will arise.
Nothing can compare to their life with wings.
 
She has wings like a bird,
They are her way of life.

© 2009 LivingHope.


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Good work. Emotions brought out well. I enjoyed read the poem. Jay

Posted 14 Years Ago


great...wings like a bird...we'd all like to sprout wings and escape

Posted 14 Years Ago


awesome...great poem

Posted 14 Years Ago


Escapism: beautiful. This is nicely written, it flows well and you've used punctuation effectively. I really like it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gorgeous piece. I really enjoyed reading this. Loved it!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Hello! I'm Stewie, which is my basketball nickname. I'm a 15 year old girl and I have been writing since I was 10. I love reading and writing. I play basketball almost year round. When I write, I usua.. more..

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