LADY OF THE LATHER

LADY OF THE LATHER

A Poem by kublakhan27
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The gloss of your kneecaps
advertise sweet skin summits
over scented bubble drifts

Toenails instinctively waltz
on unseen porcelain
while your shoulders occur to me
smooth as caramel syrup
and wayward pearls of sweat
incline me to follow your torso
down to the water horizon

Do I inquire or
do I imagine

A question deferred
till I mine the wet surface
and come up with handfuls of
bubbly treasure to send to you
with a swift breath
like showers of white rose petals

© 2014 kublakhan27


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I just took a bubble bath last night with my candles and sparkling wine.. Is there anything better for a woman.. heavy sigh.. Well I can think of one.. lol
Very sensual write. I loved these lines especially..

"sweet skin summits
over scented bubble drifts" and

"Toenails instinctively waltz
on unseen porcelain
while your shoulders occur to me"

Love the way your mind drew picture of the bubbles over her body reflecting line snow on the mountains.. Wonderful piece. thank you for the rr.. shallimar



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

I must admit that this one was aimed directly for a woman's heartstrings ;) I don't know much about .. read more



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Nice poem. Very sweet. Easy.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed it, many thanks.
I just took a bubble bath last night with my candles and sparkling wine.. Is there anything better for a woman.. heavy sigh.. Well I can think of one.. lol
Very sensual write. I loved these lines especially..

"sweet skin summits
over scented bubble drifts" and

"Toenails instinctively waltz
on unseen porcelain
while your shoulders occur to me"

Love the way your mind drew picture of the bubbles over her body reflecting line snow on the mountains.. Wonderful piece. thank you for the rr.. shallimar



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

I must admit that this one was aimed directly for a woman's heartstrings ;) I don't know much about .. read more
This just made me want to linger in a candle lit bubble bath with a glass of white wine. In love with the the last stanza...

'and come up with handfuls of
bubbly treasure to send to you
with a swift breath
like showers of white rose petals'

Sounds dreamy and naughty all in the same breath. Loverly. ;-)



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha yes I was trying to find the middle ground between a journey and a destination...I've actually .. read more
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Now my toenails want to waltz again.......... ;-)
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Haha Take this waltz? ;)
I think this is wonderful...nice flow, and it's really sweet. Lovely :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much :)
Love the title , it's quite sensual great imagery.

Posted 11 Years Ago


kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Thanks I'm glad you like it^^
Sexual intimacy is implicitly apparent on each line. Though not directly expressed, the simplicity of the words made it easy to follow and easy to form any interpretation at the desired level of specificity. This is my favorite:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

:) I'm glad this one is a favourite for you cuz I actually do have a soft spot for this one...it's .. read more
This is beautiful!
I really enjoyed it ^_^
100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the compliment and the perfect score...I really appreciate it :D
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11 Years Ago

Anytime ^_^
Very nice poem Steve :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Thank you Kels :)
beautiful and deep ...well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Many thanks.
beautiful work, I love the description, the slight sensual feel to the power. It's like female empowerment strong and lovely. :) well at least that was my interpretation. good work as usual :D!

Posted 11 Years Ago


kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha I never thought of that but hey I have no problem being the follower if the female wants to lea.. read more
quixotic_rose

11 Years Ago

YES score for thinking of it haha :)
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

lol no problem :)

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Added on July 20, 2012
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kublakhan27

Nova Scotia, Canada



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My first book is out! Any comments that anyone may have to offer regarding my work would be deeply appreciated, as I'm yet to get a review. www.amazon.com/Waltz-Around-Swirls-Steven-Fortune/dp.. more..

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