THE MEANING OF THIS

THE MEANING OF THIS

A Poem by kublakhan27
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Sunshine squall and cloudy mist
fight for newborn's dawn

On our lives the shapeless forms
shadows cast upon

Never see and never hear
never know the night

Hope the duties of the day
summon what is right

© 2012 kublakhan27


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kublakhan27
An old chestnut.

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Great rhyme scheme and structure, I loved the first verse. Very well written!

Posted 11 Years Ago


kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Thanks very much :)

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kublakhan27
kublakhan27

Nova Scotia, Canada



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My first book is out! Any comments that anyone may have to offer regarding my work would be deeply appreciated, as I'm yet to get a review. www.amazon.com/Waltz-Around-Swirls-Steven-Fortune/dp.. more..

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