INCANTATION

INCANTATION

A Poem by kublakhan27
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Enter my grove
Reside in my ritual
Nourish the clove
That craves the habitual

Tickle the stream
That coyly recoils
In ripples that gleam
Like honeydew oils

Wade through yourself
Discover your blood
Self-baptize yourself
Rejoice in the flood

Stay from the lake
Come whisper with me
Indulge and partake
In seminal spree

© 2012 kublakhan27


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ooooooooh wow... now this is dark, delicious, and damn stimulating... oh my goodness!!! love the rhymes and the rhythm in this one that adds to the intensity of the concise, powerful lines... the second stanza has to be my favorite.. HOT... wheeeew..... I love the way your mind works sir... This has to be one of my favorites of yours.. ooooh yes... some steamy imagery going on in my head right now, you naughty thing!! love it!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

So glad you like this one my friend, I had an inkling that you might though it is one of those infam.. read more
AprilRN1210

6 Years Ago

well, it is a tease, but a good one... and WOW.. it is that old?... impressive.... you giggling like.. read more
kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

Haha I should charge admission for it cuz I don't giggle often ;P



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Oh for heaven sake, why do you tease me so, with such playful little rhymes.
Have you no shame? :)
(Yes, of course I like it.)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

Haha Well that's different, I think ;P
Matching Socks

6 Years Ago

He keeps talking about a lasso of truth too...?
I dunno.
God I hope he doesn't read th.. read more
kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

Hahaha A lasso? Hmm...
I like this a lot. You started with the subtle embedded references way back in the day apparently. One thing, and don't shoot me, because this is an old poem I realize, and has stood as is for a long time. Believe it or not every once in a while I will go back and tweak an oldie -- third stanza, the repetition of yourself when none of the poem is repetitive like that, not sure it fits -- what about discover the blood in the font of self baptism, or some other type thing? Sorry, probably stuck my paws too far in -- but really, a great write. Just thought I might stretch you a little.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the suggestions :)
Lyn Anderson

6 Years Ago

No problem.:)
won't let me save in favorites!! stupid site!!! grrrr

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

Oh I know, trust me...my RRs and library didn't work for a month until this week, and I'm always par.. read more
AprilRN1210

6 Years Ago

I hope so... thanks.. just saved the link.. I am stubborn like that.. lol :P
where there's a w.. read more
kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

Haha Yes I have a bunch of links saved from when I was having the glitches, and I'm pretty sure a fe.. read more
ooooooooh wow... now this is dark, delicious, and damn stimulating... oh my goodness!!! love the rhymes and the rhythm in this one that adds to the intensity of the concise, powerful lines... the second stanza has to be my favorite.. HOT... wheeeew..... I love the way your mind works sir... This has to be one of my favorites of yours.. ooooh yes... some steamy imagery going on in my head right now, you naughty thing!! love it!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

So glad you like this one my friend, I had an inkling that you might though it is one of those infam.. read more
AprilRN1210

6 Years Ago

well, it is a tease, but a good one... and WOW.. it is that old?... impressive.... you giggling like.. read more
kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

Haha I should charge admission for it cuz I don't giggle often ;P
Wow... this is like... DARK lol. And kinda surprising. It feels like something I'd write lol. IT'S A NICE CHANGE and a very chilling poem~. Made me cringe in a positive way! GOOD JOB!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tsukin Archangel

7 Years Ago

LOL romantic? I suppose if your "grove" is like a euphimism for something.... along the vaginal line.. read more
kublakhan27

7 Years Ago

Hahaha it's all good ;)
Tsukin Archangel

7 Years Ago

Lol wazzup anyway? Been awhile
I loved the metaphor in this sensual write. I really, really liked.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

7 Years Ago

So glad you enjoyed this one, thank you Pryde.
Very interesting and very good imagery. It reminds me of something Satanic. I like it a lot.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

7 Years Ago

Oh, I didn't mean it to sound evil haha Glad you liked it though, thank you Sammi :)
This is different for you...a bit of a divergence in style and texture, but I like it. You show your diversity here in that you are writing with more of a sublime and ethereal voice, and I can definitely feel the romance here, even if it is somewhat hidden between the lines. I find romance in torment, beauty in tragedy, but then again, I'm a writer, so what can I say? Lovely...MORE!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

7 Years Ago

Haha I'll admit that I'm proud of this one, but it was written fourteen years ago (WOW) so I was sti.. read more
Lyrical, powerful and quite thought provoking. I enjoyed this very much!

:) Julie

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

7 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed it, thank you Julie :)
powerful piece

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

8 Years Ago

Many thanks

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Tags: romance, love, beauty, enter, grove, crave, ripples, honey, discover, blood, baptize, whisper, indulge

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Nova Scotia, Canada



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