OBVIOUSLY

OBVIOUSLY

A Poem by kublakhan27
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what the lord wants
he makes

what the devil wants
he takes

© 2012 kublakhan27


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kublakhan27
I've been asked by a good number of people recently (three in fact) to post some stuff from the archives, hence this little flood of posts.

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short yet full,,,

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Many thanks
chuna

11 Years Ago

welcome,,,
i absolutely love this. very profound, dark and intriguing. amazing that so few words can speak such loud volumes. stunning piece this is

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ms. barrie

11 Years Ago

You're verily welcome Kublakhan! was a pleasure to read, brilliant poem, thanks for sharing :)
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

:)
ms. barrie

11 Years Ago

:)
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TLK
Then why did the Lord make the Devil?

Because taking is as important as making.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Exactly haha :P
None of the "proper nouns" are capitalized... significant? I think it is. Makes my mind drift to politics rather than religion. Nice!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Thank you Avy :D That started as a stylistic decision but now that you mention it, it did the door f.. read more
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

*open lol
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Pax
so short but wow.... that's deep!!!
is it about religion or about just a person...?
i guess it all depends on us right... to weigh each wants into a balance...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Thank you Pax...this is possibly the most concise short piece I've ever come up with :) I think it c.. read more

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Added on December 23, 2012
Last Updated on December 23, 2012
Tags: lord, god, devil, satan, want, lust, makes, takes

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kublakhan27
kublakhan27

Nova Scotia, Canada



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My first book is out! Any comments that anyone may have to offer regarding my work would be deeply appreciated, as I'm yet to get a review. www.amazon.com/Waltz-Around-Swirls-Steven-Fortune/dp.. more..

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