BARRELS

BARRELS

A Poem by kublakhan27
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02 24 13

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Willingly
would I make room for impotence
in my psychology
were it as trusty in there
as it is in my irony

Willingly
would I white impotence out
of the profane scrawlings of
those sad blokes wayward
enough in their psychology
to deem me fortunate

if
the intent transl(oc)ated
inklings of productivity
to the pale pinstriped potential
I stare down in
demoralizing durations
of regularity
frittering away the willing
productivity of
uptight quills like twins
severed at the handle

© 2013 kublakhan27


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Frustrating isn't it dear poet?!!
You have brilliantly, and may I add, intensely depicted your frustrations down to the very fiber of your being...in which you have described as "impotence" of your psychological mind...
I think you need not worry! This is one hell of an expression! Bravo!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

It is indeed dear fellow poet ;P Your assessment is flawless...this review brought a big smile to my.. read more



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what a beautiful weaved web of the writer (in touch) with the (out of touch),
which goes through spider egg shelled thoughts reeling the victim stomped at first bit...great piece as always

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Many thanks my friend...I can certainly relate to that description.
I think you broke my brain...in a good way ;-) This is brilliant.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

It's a relief to hear you say that cuz it sounds rather painful haha Thank you Kim ;)
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

Always my pleasure ;-)
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

:)
the complexities of your mind will forever intrigue me. Why barrels??? Is this a barrel of burried thoughts? A barrel of confusion? A barrel of whiskey? Whatever it may be, it was thought-provoking....and I thank you for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

As always, thank you Muse for your unique insights...I could say in all honesty that it is all those.. read more
This is a well written piece with great imagery that surely captures the eye. Great job~!
100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
Rhianne Ney

11 Years Ago

welcomezz
this reminds me highly of the great youtuber PewDiePie....

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

I've heard of him and watched him a bit, I just never thought I'd be mentioned in the same sentence .. read more
Careline

11 Years Ago

Well then, hello fellow bro! :D We shall assassinate those dang barrels together with Pewdie! :3
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha indeed ;D
Thank you my friend, for sharing such a beautiful heartfelt, and enduring piece of reality here. You convey the real meaning in your words of your sentiment... and I agree with the words of sis Robbie, she sais it really to the point on this write. Sometimes, it is just that frustrating and difficult, and your ending, did explained this too well for me... shivers... excellency in your quill, and word choices... thank you for sharing poet!!

- Elisa

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

So do you to us friend!!! you're such a talent.... keep on writing, I shall keep following you ! :D
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

And I will follow you as well :D

11 Years Ago

:)
Frustrating isn't it dear poet?!!
You have brilliantly, and may I add, intensely depicted your frustrations down to the very fiber of your being...in which you have described as "impotence" of your psychological mind...
I think you need not worry! This is one hell of an expression! Bravo!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

It is indeed dear fellow poet ;P Your assessment is flawless...this review brought a big smile to my.. read more
I get life is a bit boring sometimes. And usually for a writer, we try to capture it. It sometimes comes out abstract. In that sense, very unique. Good job.....Kabu...?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Thank you Anna :)
Catchy stanzas, witty and cleverly unique. This piece displays the beauty of written complexity that has been put together nicely for all admirers to see. Great work. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Many thanks, my friend :)
Oftentimes our desire does not coordinate with our mood. I've been experiencing this kind of feeling intermittently that no matter how fabulous the idea inside my head my vocabulary won't be kind enough to spare me magic. I call this in the brink of writer's block:) Does that even make any sense? LoL.. As always, there is complexity on this write and although the thought and feelings are not directly apparent it has been implied throughout the poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

It makes perfect sense...everything you've said here makes perfect sense...I was well into writer's .. read more
Androglossia

11 Years Ago

It is throwback indeed but as you can see it no longer gave me headache, lol. You have done a big de.. read more

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Added on February 25, 2013
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Tags: impotence, psychology, psyche, irony, demoralizing, potential, block, quills, twins, severed, handle

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kublakhan27
kublakhan27

Nova Scotia, Canada



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My first book is out! Any comments that anyone may have to offer regarding my work would be deeply appreciated, as I'm yet to get a review. www.amazon.com/Waltz-Around-Swirls-Steven-Fortune/dp.. more..

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