DON'T FALL ANGEL

DON'T FALL ANGEL

A Poem by kublakhan27
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Cling to the cloud that has dimmed the bright sky
Hang on till the sun wipes your teary wings dry
Heaven will hold you in magnetic grip
The prayers of the souls you've touched
will ring through the conscience of the atmosphere
insuring faith in all dimensions

Your grounded lover sleeping
sends his dreams to you
and will not leave the ground below you

His slumber like your wings is wet
forbidding him to fly to you
but through the screen of his disturbed sleep
his lonely voice calls

Angel
Don't fall

© 2014 kublakhan27


Author's Note

kublakhan27


An old chestnut from 2000...I did have a longer, revised version of this, but sure enough I can't find it, so here's the original, untouched.

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Decided to do some "digging" for treasure and look what I found... let me start off by saying... I LOVE THIS SONG... lot of memories attached to this one.. fitting sir...

now, on to this poem... I am partial to "angels" anyways.. my gran used to call me her little "angel"... ughhh makes me tear up thinking about it.. jeeez I am an emotional mess, I apologize...

this is so bittersweet.. it touches me deeply.... the imagery and emotion in this piece are POWERFUL... how the heck did I miss THIS one... seriously.. it is amazing.. you are gonna have to whop me upside the head a few times if necessary... email em to me, message me, RR me, something!! jeez... let this thing sit here and didn't mention it... shame on you!! I am loving this piece... fingers crossed it lets me save it in favorites.. stupid site... grrrrr.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

Where do I begin my friend? I love the song as well, even though the memories attached to it for me.. read more
AprilRN1210

6 Years Ago

well good! send me some and will get to them little bits at a time.. like treasure hunts.. and thank.. read more
kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

I've been where you are my friend...I'm just glad that I can provide some measure of positivity ((hu.. read more



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So poignant and longing… Simply breathtaking imagery.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

So glad you enjoyed it M, I hold this one close to the heart for many reasons.
Wow, I ran across this in the "related writing" bar, probably because I was just reading another poem with the angel theme. How lucky! I love the notion of angels, which must be the ultimate in beautiful beings. Your images are stunning.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

So glad you enjoyed this one Jennie...it's hard to believe for me looking back on this that it's alm.. read more
Jennie Baron

6 Years Ago

You're more than welcome!.
Decided to do some "digging" for treasure and look what I found... let me start off by saying... I LOVE THIS SONG... lot of memories attached to this one.. fitting sir...

now, on to this poem... I am partial to "angels" anyways.. my gran used to call me her little "angel"... ughhh makes me tear up thinking about it.. jeeez I am an emotional mess, I apologize...

this is so bittersweet.. it touches me deeply.... the imagery and emotion in this piece are POWERFUL... how the heck did I miss THIS one... seriously.. it is amazing.. you are gonna have to whop me upside the head a few times if necessary... email em to me, message me, RR me, something!! jeez... let this thing sit here and didn't mention it... shame on you!! I am loving this piece... fingers crossed it lets me save it in favorites.. stupid site... grrrrr.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

Where do I begin my friend? I love the song as well, even though the memories attached to it for me.. read more
AprilRN1210

6 Years Ago

well good! send me some and will get to them little bits at a time.. like treasure hunts.. and thank.. read more
kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

I've been where you are my friend...I'm just glad that I can provide some measure of positivity ((hu.. read more
I like the concept of this piece. You have a way of writing that makes the reader want to jump to the next line, for there is a story within this poem that reads remarkably. Thanks for the share. Hope to read more of your work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much for the kind words Wall...I will be back to read more of your work soon as well.
Such a beautiful piece....
The grounded lover.
I can almost imagine a couple in bed together, one sleeping while the other watches loving, maybe touching a cheek, planting a soft kiss, whisper sweet little nuthin's. All the things that sweet dreams are made of.
(Ok, I know it was angels but my angel has arms, not wings). :-)
Really great poem, loved it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

I love your interpretation :) Thanks so much Ance, I'm glad it took you to a beautiful place :)
Matching Socks

6 Years Ago

It did. :)
Thank you. It was lovely to float with your angel.
Holding on when the going gets almost unbearable is a challenge many are unable to meet.......it is these moments when someone who understands is there to help overcome the pain and suffering that is felt. Your words are very touching and comforting to those in need of such a friend!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Sheila...looking back on this one, it's hard to believe that I wrote it fourteen year.. read more
This has so many beautiful aspects to it. It allows you to wander through your words and apply to your own journey... excellent write..xo

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Lily :)
Sigh, you know for my own personal reasons, reading this brings tears to my eyes Steve, you've touched my heart and your poem tugs at my soul...not many words can articulate how this one affected me, especially that final line. xo

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

I'm glad that it touched you my dear friend...I guess I don't need to say who inspired me to resurre.. read more
This is absolutely beautiful. I loved reading it. It flowed very well. Nice job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

So glad you enjoyed it, thank you Aarea :)

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