BY ANONYMOUS

BY ANONYMOUS

A Poem by kublakhan27
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My few friends

evidently

have more friends than me

 

It's like

a disclaimer

handcuffing relevance

 

Sensitivity

swallows me

I'll never inhale

that universal air

 

I am sorry

I am not more grateful

for the gift shop

 

I'm a ship in a bottle

on the shelf of

words withheld

© 2014 kublakhan27


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Immensely appropriate title. I cannot express with words the extent to which I relate to this poem. Perhaps I must recommend a couple I've penned down myself - perhaps poetry is my instrument of expression. Although the poem in its entirety speaks perfection, the second and final stanza shine within the bubble of perfection. Amazing work. Thanks for the share.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much for the kind words Wall, it truly means a lot...I have to sign off right now but feel.. read more



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Immensely appropriate title. I cannot express with words the extent to which I relate to this poem. Perhaps I must recommend a couple I've penned down myself - perhaps poetry is my instrument of expression. Although the poem in its entirety speaks perfection, the second and final stanza shine within the bubble of perfection. Amazing work. Thanks for the share.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much for the kind words Wall, it truly means a lot...I have to sign off right now but feel.. read more
I guess we all feel this way sometimes.Like we are standing still while all our friends are moving on in an ever changing world we aren't moving as fast as it is.Really touching poem KK:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vidya Bacchus

6 Years Ago

I did as always enjoy your work .Have a great weekend KK :)
kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

Same to you my friend :)
Vidya Bacchus

6 Years Ago

..................:)
╰☆╮Wow, those last few lines. I believe I have found another favorite poem on this site. ╰☆╮

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

So glad you enjoyed it Brittany, thank you for the kind words :)
This piece took my breath away. I feel that way sometimes, like I have few friends compared to the people I am friends with. I guess we all get lonely sometimes. I love when I can relate to a poem, and I can relate to this one!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Ally, it means a lot to know that someone relates to these words :)
Ally Monique

6 Years Ago

no problem, the pleasure is mine :)
It's been a while, and as always, you amaze with the words you choose.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

Thank you Kenneth, great to hear from you again.
This is really well done. Everyone feels like this sometimes.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

I'm sure the vast majority of us do, but I'm thinking there are a few who don't, at least not while .. read more
Lyn Anderson

6 Years Ago

Oh, you and I have had this discussion before, yes, and that is why I wrote my feature, I was in jus.. read more
kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

I know, and I feel do feel bad about that cuz I've dragged a lot of people into this discussion, sev.. read more
Like everyone here, I've been just a statistical minority among the many... The impression I have from reading this is is that you aren't just a number, you yearn for what those friends of yours have... More ears to listen... Being that the subject matter is very relatable, you do a good job of describing the effects of being sort of lonely... It might sound as though the speaker is envious of those friends who have lots of other friends too... Well done, K.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

What can I say, you're spot-on with your observations...I don't envy my friends because I'm truly pr.. read more
Dear Anonymous,

I've read SO MANY of your poems.
You sure do write a lot of them.

Keep up the good work.

~A~

(And you thought you weren't getting noticed? silly rabbit...)


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

Haha Well I'm nowhere near as prolific as some friends of mine, or as popular, or as noticed...I lov.. read more
Matching Socks

6 Years Ago

You're quality all the way... :)
kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

Thank you Ance, that means a lot :)
Quality is much preferable to quantity and this fine piece of poetic introspection has quality throughout!

A clever piece of character analysis, splendid indeed!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Tom :)
Tom

6 Years Ago

Great piece Kubla, the pleasure's mine !
Excuse me, could you move over a bit, yes it's me, the shot glass with the picture of the Grand Canyon on it, this shelf isn't that big. This was great Kublkhan27. I know this feeling. I enjoyed reading this today.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

I agree, the Canyon is more popular and awe-inspiring, especially when it's on a shot glass, which I.. read more

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