Pain

Major part of life is pain

A bird lay it's eggs on the nest try to keep it
safe and free
Those eggs turns out be a food for the snake
Which lies beside the tree
Seeing only the empty nest a bird will be in Vain
It shatters it's wings, shakes it head but can't express the pain

A snake lives in a small caves of rock
with all its small one
An eagle searching for the food plucks
the baby Snakes when there is no one.
Snake returns after search of food finds none of its child
It sees up the sky
It looks around, Up and down, it crawl faster as long it can
But to find it's child it can't fly

A mother knows pain of delivery
A father knows pain of getting right salary
A greedy knows pain of hungry
A rich knows pain in pressure and getting angry

Being a human with all super sense we can express our pain
Which can give some nourishment
But pain is a pain for all creatures express it or not
To a heart its always punishment

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Pain is a part of life, yes but still one should have the courage to get alongwith life.. I liked reading this.. By giving different examples of pain endured by everyone, you have conveyed the feeling well! Good work ☺

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you i am glad you have liked it

[Dr. YumnaKay]

you are welcome :)

[Jess]

Really creative and profound. The way you've written your poem giving examples of pain experienced by animals, birds and humans is very intelligent. Well thought out. Keep it up.

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you for stopping by........

[Jess]

:) Np .

[DIVYA]

In a way, our poems are an extension of ourselves. Through this poem, I see an empathetic soul, sensitive to the injustice, the unfairness around him. The examples given in the poem are raw and gut wrenching and evoke much emotion in the reader. Your poetic voice rings out so loud and clear. Appreciated a lot!

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you for reading.......You are right "poems are extension of ourselves"........We don't just sit back and right whatever that comes in mind, we write what we have experienced what we have truly felt around us............

[DIVYA]

So true...Thank you for sharing your thoughtful self, with this poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with your thoughts.
"A mother knows pain of delivery
A father knows pain of getting right salary
A greedy knows pain of hungry
A rich knows pain in pressure and getting angry "
Pain is part of life and pleasure too. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sindu]

A mother knows pain of delivery
A father knows pain of getting right salary
A greedy knows pain of hungry
A rich knows pain in pressure and getting angry


Very true Kuldeep! They say pain is gain but after a while holding in the pain or holding onto the pain can be destructive. The way you interpreted in in all scenarios and life forms is brilliant. Some speak while many don't..

[Kuldeep desai]

Yeah ur right pain may give gain but a person knows how much does he suffer.............Thank you for reading my poem and i wish let u get the least amount of pain in your life........tc.......

[Sindu]

Thank you and you're welcome.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Pain in some ways can build character called carrying our water.

Regards,

Al

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you for the review

[Tiana]

Very profound in depth poetry ... Wonderfully written ... :)

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you for the review......

[Cindy Marietta]

Really enjoyed reading this. I love how you used different animals, especially the snake, which most humans are apathetic toward. It really sheds light on the fact that pain is everywhere. Great poem!

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you for the review.....

[Arshia]

This one's a poem with an amazing depth and which leaves the reader immensely moved!
I loved the way you expressed the helplessness of the snake. 'It crawls faster as long as it can!'
Very well written, Kuldeep :)

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you for the review.......

[Laura Lynn]

You must be very wise, for you observe, telling us, or reminding us:

"A mother knows pain of delivery
A father knows pain of getting right salary
A greedy knows pain of hungry
A rich knows pain in pressure and getting angry"

the opening image is very nice as well, like a fable

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you for the review....