Friendship

Friendship

A Poem by Kuldeep desai

If I am stuck in the middle of the sea,

You will even swim to find me!

If I am caught in a labyrinth and can't see,

You'll be the light to guide me!

There is no blood relation no permanent bond

Holding hands, it's just trust we carry along..


You perceive my pain

When smile, I try to feign...

'You' care how I feel

for others, it's no big deal!

We are embedded with different minds,

'Love' is what truly binds...

'Love' that can never end,

There's nothing broke that friendship can't mend!


Dirty jokes,Harmless bitching,Conspirational winks

and so many other things!

When together our, imagination infallibly gets its wings

You are the sky full of stars

you always lie in my heart

You are the lightning from the cloud

no one can make us apart!

What comes and goes is a trend,

but what stays forever is You, my dear friend!


© 2015 Kuldeep desai


Author's Note

Kuldeep desai
Written at pairing up poetry by me and Arshia

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Great poem to show how love feels between two friends, in contrast to the uncaring world beyond. I love how you start with the more noble aspects of devotion & trust, then you work your way to the more mundane laughable moments that friends share. Your descriptions are familiar, yet originally stated & it's believable that you're sharing something special here (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


A good friend is priceless in a dog eat dog world. If you have friends you won't suffer loneliness. It is a wonderful feeling to know you have people watching your back and you their's. Nice write.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


Very simple, and a rhythmic read. Friendship blooms with love. And the only way to have a good friend is to be one.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Kuldeep desai

1 Year Ago

thanks for reading..... Cheers.... 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
Kuldeep,
its so true, people with different mind still connect with each other so strongly . just loved your poems.
thanks for sharing

Prandya

Posted 1 Year Ago


Kuldeep desai

1 Year Ago

thanks for reading..... Much appreciated...
Aw, the first few lines really made me smile. I loved this. Thanks for sharing it with me!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Beautiful ..... I loved it ^~^ Had a nice feeling and you ended it superbly with that beautiful sentence. That sentence just summed up everything you said. Very nicely written :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Kuldeep desai

4 Years Ago

thank you Luna i am glad you have liked it :).......
Luna

4 Years Ago

Your welcome :)
Such a nice poem friend. You know that is the only relationship on this earth needs no time to bond, but true friends have to follow some virtues, nowadays true friendship is vanishing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Kuldeep desai

4 Years Ago

thank you.....:)
True friendship, a precious relation.
Nice poem ;)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Kuldeep desai

4 Years Ago

tika keysko............
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4 Years Ago

what do you mean?
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Good friends, life long friends are precious and these relationships need to be looked after, nurtured. Great poem. Starz x

Posted 4 Years Ago


Kuldeep desai

4 Years Ago

thank you and i am glad that you have liked it.........
Friendship is so well defined!
all that rhyming and great use of vocab adds a great flow to it...
"What comes and goes is a trend,
but what stays forever is You, my dear friend!"
well said!


Posted 4 Years Ago


Kuldeep desai

4 Years Ago

Thank you i am glad you have liked it

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