just i'll say

just i'll say

A Poem by kurdapiaful
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another heartfelt piece.

"
here comes the rain,
makes me cry in vain;
can't hide the pain,
feeling like insane.

those crazy times,
bring tears in my eyes;
trying to keep those lies,
acting in disguise.

sunny day became night,
when you were out of sight;
tears, how I tried to fight,
yet I'm still not alright.

In God I pray,
for you to stay;
"come what may. . ."
just I'll say.

© 2011 kurdapiaful


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Amen.

Posted 12 Years Ago


beautiful and blessing lines

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This sounds good read aloud. Nice work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a great poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ah, thwarted love, it's a real pain. Very rhythmic, I like that. I use it myself.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice write, I like the monorhyme in each stanza, I do those from time to time and I find it tympanically pleasing as it is reas aloud!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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