U Yes U

U Yes U

A Poem by Kurt Stroebel

U really are the most important thing to me

Without U I don’t know where I woUld be

 

Without U there’s no soUnd in my heart

Without U my foUndation falls apart

 

Without U this Union is not nearly complete

Without U there’s no groUnd beneath my feet

 

Without U my soUl is just an empty glove

Without U there’s no abUndance of love

 

Yes U are the most important I insist

Because without U…Us does not exist

 

I LOVE U!!!!!

© 2008 Kurt Stroebel


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cute

Posted 13 Years Ago


lol this poem was cute. ^_^

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very clever format and it rhymes well. Whoever your wrote this for must be pleased.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Wow! That is super sweet! I loved it. =) Awesome Job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I relate. Strong message cleverly written. Great job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very clever word play here...nice sentiment as well

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awe that is so sweet and sincere...love how you capitalized all the U's... very nice work... good to see you writing again.

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Added on October 29, 2008

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Kurt Stroebel
Kurt Stroebel

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Have you ever wanted something so much that you can feel the desire right down to the marrow in your bones? Have you ever felt something was so right that nothing could shake it's foundation? And th.. more..

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