Our First Kiss

Our First Kiss

A Story by Kyle
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It's happened to all of us.

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        Our first KISS 
 
So we have known this for a time A long time 

This innocence This pretending This need

We only know each other innocently Or do we?

We act like it isn't in the air But it's all over the air

We both try to pretend everything is OK 
That we don't really need this to happen

Neither of us want to be the first to risk anything

This need of ours is so mutual But why? 

Why do we both have to pretend the giant pink elephant isn't in the room?

Who has the most to lose? Who wants to make the first move?

Who wants to take the risk to enjoy such pleasure?

Who will it be?

© 2011 Kyle


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Kyle
Mmmmmmmm.

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I like the ramble of thoughts here. My favorite line:

We act like it isn't in the air But it's all over the air

It's amazing the people we meet in life, we all have toyed with making the decision of crossing that line to become lovers.

But the question remains....

Who has the most to lose?

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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I like the ramble of thoughts here. My favorite line:

We act like it isn't in the air But it's all over the air

It's amazing the people we meet in life, we all have toyed with making the decision of crossing that line to become lovers.

But the question remains....

Who has the most to lose?

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

That was a good one!
Keep writing..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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