Can you see how I feel?

These try to express strong feelings I had for someone about 6 years ago. I was conflicted since she wasnt free to be involved.

It is so obvious I am sure
The way I feel about you 

Do you notice though my eyes?
Can you see how I feel?

I don't see others only you
I always listen to you, your voice 

When you are around no one else is
When you speak all is quiet

When you feel something I do too
When you want an opinion I take your side

When you look at me I am calm and alive
When you walk into a room no one else is there

When you need something I am there
When you ask I always answer

When I leave for a while I worry about you
Are you going to be ok? Do you need me for something?

When you are not ok I notice right away
When you are upset I ask if I can help

When you laugh I look at your face 
When you frown I see your sad eyes

I want you to know How I feel
I want to know could you feel the same?

I'm afraid you may want another another man
Could this be true? This would hurt me so much

When you are somewhere else I am with you
When I am away You are always with me

When will I be able to tell you? Of my true love for you?
What will you say To my expressions of love?

Author's Note

This is straight from my heart.

Reviews

[~ Stefanie ~]

In the third to last stanza you repeated the word "another" twice. Unless that was intentional. Anyway, this was a beautiful write, and I loved how you posed a situation and ended it with a respnse:
"When you look at me I am calm and alive
When you walk into a room no one else is there

When you need something I am there
When you ask I always answer"

I thought it was great!

[pinpen]

Awe this write is so sweet and tender. I enjoyed this, thanx for your kind review

[Sugar and Spice]

This is such a gorgeous write! I love the emotion that flows so effortlessly throughout this piece. It really does sound as though it comes straight from the heart.. I Love it :)

~Em

[EMF]

As wonderful a love poem it gets. Beautifully writen with perfect flow and style. Superb man. Glad I saw you were back on here.

[SilentNiaAngel]

I love this... it really straight from the heart!!!

[Sweets]

This is what every girl wishes to hear from a lover :)
Very sweet and romantic =)
and my favorite too !

[Monique]

this is adorable!

[Elizabeth]

This is ever so heartfelt Kyle. I know how it feels. I thought this young man I met felt something for me and he really let me down when he told me he never loved me but he still was in love with his ex girl friend. I am ok but it took time. Bess

[Cassie Fraga]

ooooooo....LOVED IT!!! when a piece is written from the heart it speaks so much louder... and this was amazing!! I love the flow of question and confession...
**tips my lyrical wand to you**
great work!!

[Leslie Philibert]

Enjoyed reading this.Maybe a bit breathless,but full of goodies like..... calm and alive and... when you walk into a room.....Honest.Good work.

[Kim's Poems]

I really like this it pulled on my heart strings.