Can you see how I feel?

Can you see how I feel?

A Poem by Kyle
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These try to express strong feelings I had for someone about 6 years ago. I was conflicted since she wasnt free to be involved.

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It is so obvious I am sure
The way I feel about you 

Do you notice though my eyes?
Can you see how I feel?

I don't see others only you
I always listen to you, your voice 

When you are around no one else is
When you speak all is quiet

When you feel something I do too
When you want an opinion I take your side

When you look at me I am calm and alive
When you walk into a room no one else is there

When you need something I am there
When you ask I always answer

When I leave for a while I worry about you
Are you going to be ok? Do you need me for something?

When you are not ok I notice right away
When you are upset I ask if I can help

When you laugh I look at your face 
When you frown I see your sad eyes

I want you to know How I feel
I want to know could you feel the same?

I'm afraid you may want another another man
Could this be true? This would hurt me so much

When you are somewhere else I am with you
When I am away You are always with me

When will I be able to tell you? Of my true love for you?
What will you say To my expressions of love?

© 2011 Kyle


Author's Note

Kyle
This is straight from my heart.

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In the third to last stanza you repeated the word "another" twice. Unless that was intentional. Anyway, this was a beautiful write, and I loved how you posed a situation and ended it with a respnse:
"When you look at me I am calm and alive
When you walk into a room no one else is there

When you need something I am there
When you ask I always answer"

I thought it was great!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Better and better each time.
I think you are onto something with this style of verse.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That one rocked too!
You are "On Fire"...
Had to quote Slim:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this Kyle and I believe you should never hold back on your true feelings...xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


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