Drunk enough to believe anything

Drunk enough to believe anything

A Poem by god is not great, I am

Drinking,
for the first time in a long time, 
 yet it couldn’t feel more familiar. 
Throwing back beer, shot, bottle, at a time.
 I had no preference, and it hardly mattered.
 so long as it went down quicker than my ghosts could surface. 
When I drank, I drank with such urgency that it would seem I found it imperative to my survival.
 It was. 
Intoxication made relieving the burden of the unsettled mind attainable, if only temporarily. . For a short time I could shallow out,  and make light of the misery and sorrow nested inside all compartments of my mind. 
Now I would have the capacity to drown out the sickness that had been long drowning me. 
But, I would lose this fight,  in the same way I had countless times.
Still, it is nice to dream.

© 2011 god is not great, I am


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Captivating. So relatable. So melancholy. So beautifully you. I love the tragic hopelessness, the longing for an escape that will not come. Yet also the comfort & familiarity. It's like there is a dream of liberation, but a comfort in the pain, the resignation, the known territory that everything's still the same. Good. I like it here. Even as I hate. This is home. It's mine. I'm not going anywhere...

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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amzing write awesome:))

Posted 7 Years Ago


I know where you went to write this poem. I've been there more times than I'd like to think about (if I could even remember half of those times).

Posted 8 Years Ago


capacity to drown out the sickness. Ah the way to deal. strong write

Posted 8 Years Ago


I Love Dark Poetry, when its done right...this is done right. I love the ending lines....

But, I would lose this fight/ in the same way I had countless times/
Still, it is nice to dream.

Its in that hopelessness, where dreams seems futile, yet an inkling of hope subsist. Excellent.

PoetTree, JUST ROCKS!




Posted 8 Years Ago


The inner struggle is apparent and yet sadly beautiful.
Nicely done...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Captivating. So relatable. So melancholy. So beautifully you. I love the tragic hopelessness, the longing for an escape that will not come. Yet also the comfort & familiarity. It's like there is a dream of liberation, but a comfort in the pain, the resignation, the known territory that everything's still the same. Good. I like it here. Even as I hate. This is home. It's mine. I'm not going anywhere...

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is fun to read..although its a bit sad in content too. You have an intelligent, creative style. I might just like it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i really like the simple way you use to write. you dont look for any complex in your writings. i can say you write soinocently. it is easy but not many can do it.
nice dreams always

Posted 8 Years Ago


well I could connect with this a bit, maybe not much as you could...but its relieving to let the mind stop thinking for sometime,for a night at least...the taste, the flavor doesn't matter and you meant so well when you said- "so long as it went down quicker than my ghosts could surface. "..this was a strong and powerful write

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like this very much. The speaker has no illusions, at least none I could detect.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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god is not great, I am

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No God. No food. No sleep. That’s all you really need to know about me. Atheist, Anorexic, insomniac. I am sure we have very little in common. Another note: My favorite writer ever- Charl.. more..

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