nothing about nothing

nothing about nothing

A Story by god is not great, I am
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argument with the boyfriend.

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well, so, you've won this argument..
but only by mistake.
Turns out, when I ran into my room and locked my door, I had carelessly neglected bringing with me my cigarettes, and my bottle of wine
both, natural necessities. 
the fact of the matter was, that I had left these precious items on your side of the locked door.
If I walk out, you'll think your apologies won me over. HA!
But eh,
Oh well, 
battle may have been lost, but with great cause.

© 2012 god is not great, I am


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i think its great

Posted 7 Years Ago


Meh. I don't really know what to think of this. :/
I think anybody can write down what they feel. But it's how you express it. How you manage to write it.
Maybe if you manage to write it differently, I'll learn to like it more.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Maybe wrong of me, but I smiled at the end of this: 'tis like throwing a pack of something at someone in a fit of pique, having the pack split open then, watching a mess grow and grow! Tis an amoebic disagreement that goes in all directions; arguments are so .. so and so. You write with confidence and courage .. and perhaps, a sense of the ridiculous sometimes!

' you'll think your apologies won me over. HA!
But eh,
Oh well,
battle may have been lost, but with great cause.'

Posted 7 Years Ago


I agree with Alessandro ...
This is so nice ..

Posted 7 Years Ago


I feel you. i can imagine the state you were in when writting this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This reminded me that I need to run out and buy a pack! Nice write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


cigarettes and wine are often more comforting than empty words and gestures.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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god is not great, I am

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No God. No food. No sleep. That’s all you really need to know about me. Atheist, Anorexic, insomniac. I am sure we have very little in common. Another note: My favorite writer ever- Charl.. more..

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