nothing about nothing

argument with the boyfriend.

well, so, you've won this argument..
but only by mistake.
Turns out, when I ran into my room and locked my door, I had carelessly neglected bringing with me my cigarettes, and my bottle of wine

both, natural necessities. 
the fact of the matter was, that I had left these precious items on your side of the locked door.
If I walk out, you'll think your apologies won me over. HA!
But eh,
Oh well, 
battle may have been lost, but with great cause.

Reviews

[hopelessromantic]

i think its great

[VannahBanana]

Meh. I don't really know what to think of this. :/
I think anybody can write down what they feel. But it's how you express it. How you manage to write it.
Maybe if you manage to write it differently, I'll learn to like it more.

[emmajoy]

Maybe wrong of me, but I smiled at the end of this: 'tis like throwing a pack of something at someone in a fit of pique, having the pack split open then, watching a mess grow and grow! Tis an amoebic disagreement that goes in all directions; arguments are so .. so and so. You write with confidence and courage .. and perhaps, a sense of the ridiculous sometimes!

' you'll think your apologies won me over. HA!
But eh,
Oh well,
battle may have been lost, but with great cause.'

[Mica Cornejo]

I agree with Alessandro ...
This is so nice ..

[Emrick]

I feel you. i can imagine the state you were in when writting this.

[sts.]

This reminded me that I need to run out and buy a pack! Nice write.

[Alessander]

cigarettes and wine are often more comforting than empty words and gestures.