Falling

Falling

A Poem by Carmen
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What I am feeling at the moment

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I am tired of staying strong,

And I believe it is my time to fall.

To fall on my hands and knees,

And to cry out into the darkness,

Hoping there will be someone to hear me,

To catch me,

Before I fall.

© 2012 Carmen


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Hard always to be strong. All of us need someone to pick us up sometime. I like the desire and the emotion in this poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There always is someone waiting to catch you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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