black tears

black tears

A Poem by lindsay

 

 

This pain inside of me
I fear will never leave,
It is you that has cause it-
I undoubtly believe.
These scars I have to show
Yet still others I cannot,
 It has gone deeper than that
It has affected my heart.
Watch my bloodshot eyes
As the struggle to open and close,
I cry black tears-
Have stained pages to show.
But take a look once more
And you will see
I will persevere-inside this tragedy.

© 2009 lindsay


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very emotional, you can tell by have stained pages to show was the key line in this poem I deeply thought it was very appropraite in the use, thanks for sharing and keep up the the good poems, I really enjoy them

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this.. deeply emotional... and black tears are the ink illustrating your pain ..

Excellent work...

Posted 11 Years Ago


thank you.
i appreciate it. =]


Posted 11 Years Ago


very nice poem, the emotion in it is real, its tragic, but its true. i like the reality of it, no matter how depressing it may be. though i suggest using more detailing, maybe a metaphor or two (aside from crying black tears lol). but other than that BRAVO GIRL! : )

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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