Drops of Life

Drops of Life

A Poem by lindsay

 

I like the rain.
For in it no one can see me cry.
Or the caused pain that haunts
Me everyday.
Taunting me to crack,
To break and  die.

I like the rain.
It does not judge.
It listens every day,
to what every person feels.
It listens to what every person
thinks and when they breathe
and what they have to say.

I like the rain.
It allows dancing with no rules.
To run with no breaks.
To embrace with passion.
To kiss with no fear.
To hold those so far, yet so near.

I like the rain.
The washing away of all lost souls and renewal of them.
The newly budded flowers so eagerly ready to bloom.
Ready to taste life.
 
I like the rain.
What freedom.
 

© 2010 lindsay


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In her Author's Note, the writer has been too modest, perhaps? This is simply lovely, with various references to a principle which is close to my heart. And, that is the concept of "freedom"! We neglect it, at our peril. In terms of weaknesses, it could have a better rhyme scheme? Even so, the flow is quite smooth, and there is no unintended ambiguity. This is certainly a poem worth sharing with others, and another worthy entry in my Contest, "FREE SPIRITS"!

Thankyou, lindsay!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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favorite by you so far.
:)
from the line breaks in the begining. to the short complete thoughts in the middle to the deep imagery in the end.
awesome!


Posted 10 Years Ago


This is wonderful, I really enjoyed this write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


In her Author's Note, the writer has been too modest, perhaps? This is simply lovely, with various references to a principle which is close to my heart. And, that is the concept of "freedom"! We neglect it, at our peril. In terms of weaknesses, it could have a better rhyme scheme? Even so, the flow is quite smooth, and there is no unintended ambiguity. This is certainly a poem worth sharing with others, and another worthy entry in my Contest, "FREE SPIRITS"!

Thankyou, lindsay!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love this poem so much! as i love rain too. :D
i think YOU are an amaaaazing writer. [i almost wrote "righter"] xDD

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really liked this poem. I found it a little awkward at times ("but listen it does every day" maybe rephrasing that would make it more powerful) but overall I liked the ideas and your straightforward style. Good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I like the rain too. Very cool poem,I dig it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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