golden boy

golden boy

A Poem by lindsay

 

It is not the sun kissed hair
Or the way your eyes shine,
It is your caring nature and how you dare,
To be so sensitive, sweet, and kind.
I love how you act like who you are
Regardless what people think or say.
It is as if you were my shooting star,
That I wished upon one day.
I love the way your perfect smile,
Makes me laugh when I want to cry.
When you go away for awhile,
My heart is empty and that is no lie.
Everything about you is impeccable, and in line,
I am so glad I met you and so glad you are mine.

© 2009 lindsay


Author's Note

lindsay
I wrote this for my english class about 2 years ago. We were studying Shakespeare, so hence the love sonnet.

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I love it, it is perfect and flawless, no complaints or anything here. Thanks for the submission, I really like this poem. Good job, keep it up

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's some poem for a young girl to write! I loved it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it. It seems as if you wrote the poem for a feeling I often have. I love how nicely it flows.

I love the way your perfect smile,
Makes me laugh when I want to cry.

This is exactly how I feel sometimes.
You did a great job....

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So sweet.
I really really like it, it makes me feel all warm and fluffy inside lol.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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lindsay
lindsay

Mentor, OH



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Hey, I'm Lindsay.I'm majoring in Creative Writing and Graphic Design at Ohio University. I like meeting new people.I want to travel and try everything.Writing is everything to me.I am really passionat.. more..

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