silent scream

Scream a silent scream
as the black tears they do flow,
a lost cry of despiration-
which no one will ever know.
Sitting up against the wall
with your head hung downward,
slow and heavy breathing-
life is not going foward.
Rational-
Irrational-
thoughts oh they flow,
run through the mind-
wander as the snowflakes we know.
A split mind indeed,
there is simply no use:
will it end tonight?
There should be no excuse.

Sream a silent scream
as the black tears they flow,
a lost cry of despiration-
prolong this one more day?
the answer is unknown.

Reviews

[Dominic Rosales]

very mysterious, and mind boggling, I enjoyed it and the title is catchy and right on with poem, thanks for sharing, keep on writing. :)

[QuietPoet]

I wanna know more. You make me want to keep reading. Keep writing. Make us feel your thoughts. Nicely done.

[Dennis Shanaberg]

I love how you can feel the emotion in each line.
It's as though every line contains another thought moving through your head.
And the repetition at the end reiterates the desperation of the poem.
A really intense piece.

[xXbloodyVampire]

the use of repetition is very powerful.
well written.

[John McGrael]

i freaking love this poem!!

i can relate so much....

[Constance L. Hartwell]

This poem was full of pain and emotion. You poured out your soul in these words and created a work of art. The flow was perfect. I honestly enjoyed reading this poem. Kudos.