Starlight Daydream

with a little help for the title by my friend Dennis

Warm nights are among us 
and there are celestial  skies-
the lighting bugs are flashing,
as I close my eyes.

The breeze is swirling around us-
the skies are enchating colors, that I have never seen-
the moon has an iridescent shine,
My senses are so keen.

I feel like am free falling,
this can only be a dream
Nothing is making sense
at least not to me.

My eyes reopen,
to only the exact same scene?
Nothing has changed,
can this even be?

I look right beside me,
and there you were quietly laying.
I don't need my deams,
is all that I am praying.

I've found the perfect place to,
to lay and look at stars-
it is here with you,
wrapped inside your arms.

Reviews

[Michael X]

lindsay, this is wishful, sweet and innocent, its a summer night under the stars, a pleasure to read
the flow is soft, the reader can consider this a romantic retreat in words, lovely job and talent expressed

[Dominic Rosales]

it's great to read a joyous poem, and that is why I like this poem, great job, I really truly enjoyed this poem and it was worth reading. :)

[Dennis Shanaberg]

I love this poem.
It is so happy and uplifting
A beautiful piece

[QuietPoet]

Aww this was beautiful. I love the imagery, very good. Nicely done.

[A]

Love this! It's so cute and I love the imagery and the ending is adorable. Great poem! :)