Mindless

Mindless

A Poem by lindsay

 I truely despise the way your mind thinks and sees,
you are just like a lock,useless, because there is no key.

© 2009 lindsay


Author's Note

lindsay
I am pretty sure you can understand what I am getting at by comparing a mind to a lock with no key.

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What a brilliant short poem, Lindsay. I loved it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Two lines long, yet those two lines contain more power and beauty than some writers could ever achieve in writing a thousand words or more. Very, very well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Straight and to the point
I like it so much said and such a few words

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, to be honest, you just summoned up something that would take me 10 lines to describe, into to very mind settling lines. Great job, and yes, I do understand. ☺

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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lindsay
lindsay

Mentor, OH



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Hey, I'm Lindsay.I'm majoring in Creative Writing and Graphic Design at Ohio University. I like meeting new people.I want to travel and try everything.Writing is everything to me.I am really passionat.. more..

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