Strolled into a Dream

The days keep on rolling by faster than I thought.
No one stops to enjoy the trees,the sunlight
or a crisp celestial night;
For everyone is distraught.

This person though,this guy,
he's everything I would ever want.
He is perfect in my eye.

We walk through the night and we we sneak off into our own land>
A land filled of dreams and flowing emotions
where the language spoken is of meaning-how grand.

There is an understanding between you and I, of magical means.
Our adventures are anything but ordinary
and we feel more emotions, than most have ever seen.


This guy, he knows what he wants, he wants to live his dreams.
He wants to live and get the best out of life.
We wish for the same beautiful thing-it seems.

A life of love and value.
One of journey and meaning.
Days of forever strolling,barefoot, is what I am seeing.
I want that with you.

Reviews

[Flo]

I loved this poem, I've always loved the way you write, sweet somehow and a bit sad, a bit cute too I must admit. I just loved this stanza though :
"A life of love and value,
one of journey and meaning-
days of forever strolling,barefoot, is what I am seeing.
I want that with you."
Perfect write, keep up the good work, your an inspiring poet :D
-Flo

[Michael X]

Wow,this is ever soft, tranquil, beautiful and romantic, a dreamers dream no doubt, set to moonlight
and stars that overlook two hearts walking into love, brilliant, and the wording is stellar,
you've created a specialm oment in time, the sentimental value is priceless, a real pleasure to read.

[Domo]

This was so kind hearted. I love how you wrote this, it is truly a great poem. Keep up the good writes! ☺
~D♥m♥~

[Jason]

Romantic and touching. I really like the way you grabbed my attention as the reader. Excellent job on the dialog and detail. Simply brilliant!

Jay

[Stacey Watts]

Very well written piece. I like the romantic feel to it simply beautiful.

[sierra_beautiful]

i love the way you write,
great job!

[Dennis Shanaberg]

A very, dare I say, cute poem. It's obvious to see the giddiness that love can create in this piece. I love how the love and feelings are referred to as magical. Excellent piece. Keep it up.