There is a reason

There is a reason

A Poem by lindsay

 It was a summer dream
for everything was not what it seems.
The stars shone with a brilliant  iridescent light
and I believe that's when we were in love, it was at first sight.
We would walk on water, we danced in the rain,
our emotions were flowing, there was no restraint.
The trees billowed as the wind blew,
this world is fantastical and I would not want to be in it with anyone, but you.
As the sun rose over the warm horizon,
I thought to myself quietly, things do happen for a reason.
There you were so silently laying,gazing-
your eyes glistened gloriously as we watched in amazement. 
 

© 2009 lindsay


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This pretty much brought tears to my eyes.
It was so beautifully written, and has amazing words.
The imagery was perfect, and you made me feel really in the moment.
I think this deserves a story around it! :)
This poem is going in my favourites.

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♥Jen Marks

Posted 10 Years Ago


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This pretty much brought tears to my eyes.
It was so beautifully written, and has amazing words.
The imagery was perfect, and you made me feel really in the moment.
I think this deserves a story around it! :)
This poem is going in my favourites.

youtube.com/kneecaplollipop
myspace.com/jenmarks

♥Jen Marks

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so wonderful and beautiful
well written

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this poem, it's so romantic! Very well writte, and exelent use of words.
I especially loved this part:
"We would walk on water, we danced in the rain,
our emotions were flowing, there was no restraint."
Keep writing, can't wait to read more!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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