Sparkling Winter

Sparkling Winter

A Poem by lindsay

As the new fallen snow whispers through the trees,
Plumes of black smoke blow out of chimmey's.
We awake then to see
the garden of silvery white-
It so gently fell throughout the frozen night.
Yet the sillvery flakes are still fluttering by
whirling in the wind-above from the sky.

And as I stared I counted
the footsteps in the lane.
It is Christmas time once again.

© 2009 lindsay

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Wow grate poem
good job

Posted 11 Years Ago

Wow, I could really hear and visualize everything in this poem. Fantastic job again! :) I give this 100/100!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love this one it is your best that i have seen

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Its very nice and it gives off that warm feeling inside that I get on christmas. =) I especially like the imagery. Great job.

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Added on November 25, 2009
Last Updated on November 25, 2009



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