Sparkling Winter

Sparkling Winter

A Poem by lindsay

As the new fallen snow whispers through the trees,
Plumes of black smoke blow out of chimmey's.
We awake then to see
the garden of silvery white-
It so gently fell throughout the frozen night.
Yet the sillvery flakes are still fluttering by
whirling in the wind-above from the sky.

And as I stared I counted
the footsteps in the lane.
It is Christmas time once again.

© 2009 lindsay


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Wow grate poem
good job

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow, I could really hear and visualize everything in this poem. Fantastic job again! :) I give this 100/100!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


LOVELY!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love this one it is your best that i have seen
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Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its very nice and it gives off that warm feeling inside that I get on christmas. =) I especially like the imagery. Great job.

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2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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lindsay
lindsay

Mentor, OH



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Hey, I'm Lindsay.I'm majoring in Creative Writing and Graphic Design at Ohio University. I like meeting new people.I want to travel and try everything.Writing is everything to me.I am really passionat.. more..

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