Fly with you

Fly with you

A Poem by lindsay

Your smile catches my eye
in the darkest of night 
and brightest of day.
It takes me a new level
of a natural high.
Our hands are connecting 
as we lay there intertwined.
It is these moments that allow us to fly.

© 2010 lindsay


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You've done a lot with a few short lines, nice.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I have the image of green fields with me walking hand in hand with my beloved one.

Thanks for beautiful feeling.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love the way you can describe feelings between two people so simply. sometimes simplicity is the way to go :) nice job!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

really uplifting when caught in the moment! i loved this piece! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a good poem about simplicity. Love its length.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Our hands are connecting
as we lay there intertwined.
It is these moments that allow us to fly."
...this is a great line and a wonderful poem...:-)

J:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mmmm dreams eh. The natural high. I love it. Full of imagery.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Good. You put so much into so small a poem. I luv it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful! before I read this I almost forgot what it was like to be in love.

Thanks for this gentle and vivid reminder.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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lindsay

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Hey, I'm Lindsay.I'm majoring in Creative Writing and Graphic Design at Ohio University. I like meeting new people.I want to travel and try everything.Writing is everything to me.I am really passionat.. more..

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