vampire love

A beast a beast.

How could some one love a beast like me.

A monster god for nothing but destruction.

that is me, deserving of neither love nor affection.

"why me" I ask in the darkness

who would love me who can love me.

only a fool would love a vampire. but she sees something in me.

Something not even I see.

Who is she,

does she rely love me.

Or is  it a trap

a way to get close to me.

could my heart take the the pain.

I must find out but there is a risk.

should I take or must I avoid it forced to never know the true loving heart

Reviews

[hiralarious]

This was great(:
I could sense a few different emotions...and I loved the idea of it(:
Hahha, I read the first line and I was like BEAUTY AND THE BEAST? :D
But no, this was way better(:
Well, nothing can compare to a disney movie actually.. but if disney ever had a sad emoer twin that made this into a movie.. It would own beauty and the beast :D. Hahha.
A few grammar mistakes... some commas should have been added, spelling, etc.. nothing big(:
Anyway, great piece(: