the beast and the witch

the beast and the witch

A Chapter by gimpy

A witch
a witch I see.
A beast
a beast that speaks.
Alas the world is not as it seems.
We live unaware of the witch
the witch and the beast.
Who is this beast
this beast that speaks.
Who is this witch
this witch I see.
where dose it come from this beast
this beast that's hunted.
what dose she want this witch
this witch that's burned
A kiss
A kiss from the beast to the witch.
but they are dead
this beast that speaks
and this witch I see.
the witch and the beast



© 2010 gimpy


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The repetition makes it sound great:]

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the repetiton and parallel structure. Good job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really like this... =)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is confusing, but I like the repetition. it's different.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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