A Story by the nothing

Male P.O.V (point of view)


we stood there on your mother's lawn

I wore  my "MP" uniform

"you don't have to wait for me" I tould you,and you just placed your finger over my lips and tould me

"when you come back we'll start our own life"  you promised me


I walked up the drive way your parents werent home so I wanted to surprise you.

little did I know it was I  who would get the surprise

I slowly opened the door to your bed room to see you with a man in the bed laughing he seemed much older then you.

so I purposely slamed the door walked towards the door you called my name,

but I didn't bother to turn to face you. refusing to let you see my tears I hoped in my ford and simple drove. no were in partcular. untill I passed by a bar,and

for two years I went to that same bar tring to drink your memory away

untill today

I sat on my sofa gun to head

I took one last sip then............


© 2009 the nothing

Author's Note

the nothing
female P.O.V next friday

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damn, that depressing and emotional!... I LIKE IT lol!

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the nothing
the nothing

in your house, can you see me

love is blind but death can see sucks for you more..

Leavin Leavin

A Poem by the nothing