would you

would you

A Poem by the nothing

I'd fallow you to the ends of the earth and back

I'd kill if it ment just one more moment with you

I'd die if it ment you woulden't fight

If you let this war be

but would you do the same

do you care enough....

just to give me one hug

can you even look me in the eyes

You mean the world to me

but would you hounestly say the same

could you say the same

why is it that I always care

for those who never could

but then again

"Would you"

© 2009 the nothing


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lol ow, it reminds me of me and my girlfriends relationship. so i like it, it gives not only confidence but it makes you think if "you would" really say those thing for your lover or vise versa. lol xp

Posted 13 Years Ago


I'm surprised that no one else has reviewed this, to be honest. Bloody other people...Anyway, this is a very honest write, and I was able to compare to it several times before. There's that glimmer of hope, the wish that he/she will like you back, notice that you're there, and that you're really a pretty damned good person.


Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on July 23, 2009

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Leavin Leavin

A Poem by the nothing