Charming

It is a twisted world...

Glistening and turning

swaying and leaping...

This is the way of my world.

The world of harsh realities.

 

Then the Prince appears

as charming as can be.

A lovely knight

he is sure to be.

 

His eyes of hazel

and his dark locks.

He is one to be reckoned with,

that is to be sure.

 

Now my heart knows

he is a charmer.

A friend and a love.

One from above...

Author's Note

Meant to have grammar problems. :)

Reviews

[Dream Weaver]

Beautiful flow and imagery...
Soft and delicate to read..
nicely done...

[A.r. Bazian]

well... not exactly my type of poetry... but the emotions none the less surface well!
keep it up!

[Devons]

This almost sounds as though it is the private thoughts of Cinderella or the beauty from Beauty and the Beast or some other fable... Hence (Prince) 'Charming', I guess.
And it does have a charming feel to it, too. Though it begins negatively, depicting the stark contrast of the real world, it winds-up into a very sanguine piece of poetry. This makes me think of that optimism as a dream that is being wished to be one day fulfilled.. but will it? And is it just a flash in reality's pan?
"One from above" seems to hint at this somewhat...
A pretty, beguiling poem in terms of its technique. It has sparkle.. in fact, all the qualities of the fantasy ballroom before the carriage turned into a pumpkin..

[Steve]

This is very sweet!

[Tate Morgan]

Oh I think this is beautiful deep is the hearts dreams in a young woman.,And greand are the answers to her hopes fears and dreams