Pain

I'm hurt.
Bleeding from the outside in.
Its bubbling inside creating a cell for its rotting
nature.
I want to cry and explode into zillions of pieces.
She is drifting.
From her family and friends and (life)
I just cant bear to watch any longer.
This is making me tear.
An event that I promise  won't happen again
I pray that she wouldn't be taken from me.
My best friend.
The girl who helped me through a lot of crap.
The girl who shares the other half of my heart with my sister.
I can't bear to lose her.
Not now.
Not when all of this is going on.
Not when it hurts so much that I can't find a way to go on.
God used her to keep me together.
I want to cry.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Rose of Gondor]

Ow. Poor person. This is a LOT of pain. The emotions coursed well through your words and lines and I could FEEL the dripping pain in every sentence......*flinch*

Thanks for the review ^.^

[Xicor]

Lovely... :)