Incredible Perfection

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Insight; conceptuality; hence we’ve
Incredible perfections in nature
Seen although created she no such creature.
Flawlessness we behold--are we deceived?
The sun crossed distances avast does seem
Inscribed with compass-drawn features,
But surely it's intimate dimensions bemuse,
Eyed from terrain, its true form can't be seen.
Thus of the faculties of exceptional mind,
Inspire at last, though not dictated, drawn
To life, with our wit, was the straight line,
The perfect circle-- Shapes we alone have dawned 
Perfection, offspring of human insight,
Enlightened--we see, we hold..let there be light.

Reviews

[audacicity]

absolutely great piece keep it up

[17thWhitePrince]

Incredible piece of refined poetry !!!

"The sun crossed distances avast does seem
Inscribed with compass-drawn features,
But surely it's intimate dimensions bemuse,
Eyed from terrain, its true form can't be seen."

Well said =D

[LadyRosaline]

thanks

[Nestor Gonzalez]

love it!!!! >:D

[Faffy]

stunning imagery and flawless mechanics. looking forward to seeing more of your work.

write on!

-roshan

[LadyRosaline]

Wow..thanks-a-bunches!