chapter 2

chapter 2

A Chapter by Mskendra Renee
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Dr.nummon needs a candidate .... for his experiment.

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Chapter two

Dr. Nummon believes that with all the news about new inventions and ways to save energy and recycling, that certain diseases would have cures by now. Is our society focusing too much on these things instead of their health? He goes to G.H.I.A Genetic Human Enhancement Association to get finance to do animal testing in genetics. a secret organization under the government used for only top A experiments. Because of his history with the organization he was given a under ground two story building on mount saint Elias in Alaska. it would prove to be a big change for his family. However he wasn't just going to test on animals.... he required a human. Though, not any human would do, he needed a fetus to inject DNA strains of human enhancers, into to see if he could alter the result. The mother and father needing a clean bill of health, meaning that a history of cancer, disabilities, HIV were not adequate. His team searched for months and months ultimately finding the right person. 


" I've done it" Dr. Nummon says coming out of the lab and into the test room

 

the nurses and doctors all clap their hands as he walks down the steps. he walks over to the and tell the doctors to follow him to his office.


" please sit and pay close attention" he commands sitting in his chair as the doctors walk in taking what sits were available. taking out their note pads as he began to tell them of his discovery.


"By using selective strains of nuclear waste, highly concentrated protein , genes from both mammals and reptiles according to their regeneration and sense abilities. I've also taken adrenaline as well as broken down the chemical make up of certain enhancers. this virus should give us the perfect human."


" well sir other then adding adrenaline, the enhancers and protein the virus may still be fatal to the human genetic makeup." one doctor says as other nod in agreement.


" well I'm glad you mentioned that, I've combined my research with other experiments for advancement of humans I found something very interesting. i believe that with electro shock therapy after the dosage should jump start the regeneration causing cells to multiply with the virus. From my experiments using this virus I've given you copies of the deformities of appearance , hunger and aging." he pauses as they begin to write and look over his notes of his past experiments over the past three weeks.


" it says that all of your test subjects died less then 2 hours of the experiment." 


" Those were merely pawns in my findings , i looked through they're charts and found what was common. it seemed that the younger the subject was the longer they lived. i also determined that certain test subjects with no history of illnesses lasted even longer. that's why I've come to the conclusion that if we  inject the virus at the time of conception the possibilities are endless."


Thought what Dr. Nummon was purposing goes against many laws and morals. what he was saying was making sense to the other doctors as they sit thinking about he pros and cons. if they we're to be reveled to the public they'd defiantly have they're licenses terminated as well as thrown  in jail. however they were all ready involved with helping the mad doctor kidnap thirty two people both woman and men to be studied. they all agree to his new purposely.


" i glad to hear your all on board  with this. I've already sent our nurses with what kind of test subjects ill be needing.  well start with only forty women you each will get five woman to inject and test. i will personally be in charge of collecting the woman and putting them in your designated areas of research. because this is only a three stored building the woman will be kept on the second floor and once the children our born they will be kept on the third floor . of course before i put this into action I'm looking for one subject to test on before i start the others. so for now you can go home to your family's until further notice. . thank you."


He shakes they're hands as they get up and leave the room. they go to the roof as a helicopter is waiting to take them away. because of what they we're doing and what was at stake they we're kept in the dark about the actually location of where the building was. all they knew was that it was high up only transportation was to be helicoptered to they're vehicles which were parked at a separate location two to three hours away.


(the next day)


" Dr.Nummon" Sarah says getting his attention


" yes what is it Sarah?"


" A woman named Rebecca Stern. she's 29 , a recent widower new to Dakota. she has a a doctors appointment this Thursday to get an Insemination. Apparently she has no family there and no friends on file."


He takes the mouse from her and starts strolling down the page looking at all the information. the organization was giving full access  to records of every person in the USA. not knowing that he wanted the information to find a test subject. he thought she was a good candidate but there were several other woman. 


" I know what your about to say however she's literally going to a hospital that's only a couple miles away from us. It'll be easy and shell be a good test subject."


He nods his head and they begin preparations for her arrival.




(Doctors appointment)


      She opened the door as the cold hospital air came over her, she looks at the receptionist but halts in her tracks, thinking about how she would explain her decision to her baby. How would she tell her baby later on why there wasn’t a father in their life? She was terrified by the questions and how she would answer.  Her hand was shaking rapidly as she turned in the opposite direction to leave, but stops.  Yes it'll be tough but I'll love my baby and I’ll tell him/her when the time is right.


"And who knows I may even get twins."  She says laughing knowing that if she were to leave she'd repentance. Turning around and taking a deep breathe she walks up to the receptionist.


"Hi my name is Rebecca I have an appointment with Dr.Henji?" she utters with her hands shaking.


"Awe yes one moment" she heeds as the woman pages Dr. Henji, he lets the woman know to send her back to get set. Minutes later she’s resting on a hospital bed with her legs open as the doctor inspects her.


"OK Rebecca, now just relax this is a simple procedure nothing to have anxiety about.  Just lay back and relax and in no time this will be over”  he encouraged giving her a warm smile as he puts on a new gloves.


"Who are you” he asks to a nurse entering the room, she whispers something in his ear.


“Oh I apologize nurse... Hawkins”


“What’s going on Dr.Henji?"


“Well there seems to another patient of mine who is need of my assistance. Give me a couple minutes please" she gives him an okay as he leaves the room with the nurse. 



© 2015 Mskendra Renee


Author's Note

Mskendra Renee
ignore grammarand spelling problems lol

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Honestly I almost dismissed this story at the first fight scene as giving the ordinary character unrealistic abilities, however I loved how you introduced the concept of the baby helping her. The way she questioned her abilities and then the doctor yelled out the explanation almost parallels the reader questioning her abilities and then having that character answering it to the reader. Very cool story.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Mskendra Renee

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much for reviewing my work
Doctor Sherspock

4 Years Ago

no prob thanks for sharing your work :)



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Honestly I almost dismissed this story at the first fight scene as giving the ordinary character unrealistic abilities, however I loved how you introduced the concept of the baby helping her. The way she questioned her abilities and then the doctor yelled out the explanation almost parallels the reader questioning her abilities and then having that character answering it to the reader. Very cool story.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mskendra Renee

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much for reviewing my work
Doctor Sherspock

4 Years Ago

no prob thanks for sharing your work :)
Hi! I enjoyed the concept behind your piece of writing, but the tense changes from present in your background to past in your dialogue threw me off. Also, I think the first paragraph reads more like a plot summary than part of the novel--would this be a prologue? The dialogue formatting isn't conventional--if you did this for a reason I didn't understand, then I apologize; otherwise, this link can be helpful http://webs.anokaramsey.edu/wrobel/1121/Course%20Materials/Exercises/basic_dialogue_format_for_narrat.htm.

Overall very creative concept--It'll be interesting to see how the conflicts develop and resolve

Posted 4 Years Ago


i really enjoy the premise here and love how its altered from the 1st draft that i read. the dialogue could be clearer as Astrid said its a little mixed in to the descriptions, that said its a good read and interesting idea.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This story is very good, even if I just read the first part. I have to agree with Astrid and Mr_M on there are a lot of spelling mistakes. The plot and concept are amazing, but the way you put it out, like the actual words, they're a bit dull. Use different word choices, and I know you said ignore the grammar and spelling, you need to work on it. But over all, great!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mskendra Renee

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot and I am glad you believe it's original because I wanted it to be . Yes the actual writ.. read more
lydie

4 Years Ago

Lol good job
Mskendra Renee

4 Years Ago

With the changes ?
I love the idea of enhancing genetics, and I dare say it has gone on and continues to go on... the baby makes her stronger is also very interesting. The story is solid and the ideas and imagination are the key. I would say change words like 'say' to other words. For example after dialogue use different terms. I.e " get the woman and her baby back into the ward" the doctor stated. Or declared or grunted. I think you can play around with those.

I also agree with Astrid, who has a very god eye from the reviews of have received from her. I would make it look a little cleaner with breaks so it invites people to read it. I would also use my descriptions, but that is my preference. When she gets put under maybe you describe the image of the objects and people blurring and the colours merging. I hope this helps, but it is only my opinion, not to say it is correct.

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Mskendra Renee

4 Years Ago

when you say the breaks i'm guessing you mean when it changes in time? or goes to another characters.. read more
Mr_M

4 Years Ago

Sorry, I mean as in the structure of the lines, nothing to do with what is going on within the story.. read more
Mskendra Renee

4 Years Ago

ok ,ok i get that . Thank you so much!
It's an interesting premise, however filled with many spelling and grammatical errors. It is also hard to distinguish the dialogue since they're all mushed together in paragraphs.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 4 Years Ago


Mskendra Renee

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your opinion! :-) and I'll correct the spelling errors and fix it so the dialogue.. read more
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