Lupine

Lupine

A Poem by Wingless Fallen Angel

Honey eyes stare into the night
A grey pelt ruffled by wind.
Teeth are bared in a the silent vow
Of vengeance.
Furred ears turn like an owl's head.
Slowly
Silently
Taking it all in.
Snow drifts lazily down
Covering tracks of a lupine prowl.
A howl
Muzzle turned up into a silent plea
Breath taken in
And expelled 
In a musical note
A sad and lonely hymn.

© 2013 Wingless Fallen Angel


Author's Note

Wingless Fallen Angel
About a wolf, if you didn't see that. :)
Small edits. Tell me what you think!

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I love this. It is straight forward without actually said "The Wolf". Very creative use of words. It really draws the reader in.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love your word choice and how well this poems flows, it also has a slight lyrical aspect to it which makes it all the better, overall great poem, hope to see you in next month contest

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I could imagine every second of it. Wow. Your writing... never apt words to describe it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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The lone wolf howls! Your poem brings up an evocative view of that howl and the life of a wolf.

I love the ears turning like an owl's head, so expressive a simile.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice description indeed! and quite imagery

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I did see the wolf as I first started reading this. I can also see a simpler coyote in this as the wolf is romanticized and the coyote is almost forgotten; their differences minute yet their sameness forgotten.
Wonderful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it (I love wolves by the way). I feel it was very powerful and I almost heard it like a song in my head (I blame Game of Thrones for that and the Rains of Castamere lol).

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wingless Fallen Angel

11 Years Ago

Hehe! Thank you so much!
The imagery is beautiful! I love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wingless Fallen Angel

11 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on January 25, 2013
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Tags: wolf, howl, vow

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Wingless Fallen Angel

Lake Ann, MI



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I'm Wingless Fallen Angel, obviously. Call me WFA, Wingless, Fallen, Angel, or any combination of the above! I love to write and read and not do arithmetic. I'm open to talk to you, about whatever. Me.. more..

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